Angel of Death

This was amazingly good!! I liked your idea and I thought that it was original. Your dialogue is heartwarming and hilarious. Your characters are easily lovable. The only problem I ...

Hey BBB!!!!, Well anyways, this was a good way to discover the murder. The detectives and the whole crime scene really was realistic and I thought that this was a ...

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! This was extremely brilliant. You know this sort of reminded me of The Princess Bride but not story-wise. You meshed comedy and fantasy into this long magnificent story perfectly. ...

Oi Gyr is such a good critiquer!! Well anyways, as always I loved this piece. It was beautiful and your poetic lines never cease to amaze me. What caught my ...

Hey BBB!! Awww this was a cute story. This was a good idea. Its refreshing to see another type of love because everyone is used to reading about two people ...

I love this poem. It was really simple but it carried a very powerful message. I didn't see anything wrong with this but keep writing. Sorry that I didn't have ...

Kylan you keep doing it! You have this great way of writing that makes me cry. At first you did kind of lose me but then I read it over ...

Well Jack I never knew that preyed was a word but thanks to you now I know. :D This poem has a very morbid feeling to it which is good ...

This story is getting better and better and your characters are lovely. You have me hooked and thats all there is to it. I have no complaints but I do ...

Wow this was good! Lucky for you though that I know a little Italian because if didn't I'd be lost. I usually don't read short-fast paced stories because they urk ...

Hey Kylan, Wow this is the first script I've read by you (is this your first?) I liked it, as always. I liked how different Carlos and Smith was even ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS!! Your Worst At Its Best Well my worst would be not saying that I did love this. (is that bad enough?) Ok, I must say ...

This was good but it needs some help. You start off with a girl who picks a rose but then you go on to a guy revealing his feelings and ...

Wow this was good. The way you write is not over the top but smooth and free. Your descriptions, especially when the wolves came in was fantastic. Goosebumps were lining ...

This had rhythm and was simply powerful and real. The emotions that you portrayed are ones that millions of people feel. You wrote something that a lot of people can ...